Unofficially a blog that's been shut down, you might still find the occasional post here where I mention something about exercise, rant/comment on life, or post my amateur third-person poetry.

Wednesday, February 11, 2009

Blue



They were the same
shade of blue
as the waters

Where the
clownfish
weaved among
the pink anemone
Caressed by
the tentacles
Lingering
where corals shimmered
in the bright light of day

the same
shade of blue
as the waters
where migrating
schoals weaved
dazzling vortices
of red and silver
and wave led wave
exuberantly
across the expanse

the same blue
as the waters
on which hundreds
bathed on sun decks
from port to port
The cool sea spray
a constant companion
as they met
new ones on board
their floating city

Through life's vortex
Those denim jeans
blue as the waters
became
a shade of
their old selves

lost their colour
grew frayed
worn
tired
and tears
all around


They both
saw their world
fray and rip
like those blue jeans
Worn and tired
by tears
A blue irreversibly
discoloured
now
an ill-fitting pair


and as he watched
her draw away
not lingering
Weaving into
the anemone
of the crowd

he felt his
shimmering ocean
all its vibrance
colour and warmth

fade into a

pale

lukewarm

still

blue

5 Comments:

Blogger Unknown said...

I like the poem! I hope all is well with you.

1:38 AM

 
Blogger Bec said...

Hey tryathlete!!!! I haven't been on in ages but am making a comeback. Just wanted to see if you're still around. I hope you're doing well! Talk to you soon,
B

1:20 AM

 
Blogger Bec said...

Yay! You're still here! I've got the big one scheduled again this year - IMWI. It'll be #6 but we'll see how I get there. Sporting a sweet stress fracture in my shin that just isn't interested in healing. As for the blog... I'm a bit obsessive because I'm a graphic designer and this isn't giving me enough ability to customize it! ha! I'm sure it will change 5 or 6 more times. I was just getting idea for it last night :) Glad to hear you're doing well. I'll stay tuned in and hopefully work will start giving you a break. The good news is that there is work right? I'm in the same spot...

2:22 PM

 
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Are you a runner or a poet? Or both? Glad you are always here with us.

7:09 PM

 
Blogger Anne said...

Did you compose that? It's beautiful! Who knew our little piggy was such a poet!!

12:53 AM

 

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