Unofficially a blog that's been shut down, you might still find the occasional post here where I mention something about exercise, rant/comment on life, or post my amateur third-person poetry.

Wednesday, February 01, 2006

I see the fire in your eyes
Forged from
life's trials
A defiance
A determination
to take on
anything in your path
and win

The fire that
permeates your whole being
gives you

meaning
reason
passion
hope
companionship

with the lost

a pact
down the path
where
meekness is weakness
defiance is respect
where black is white
or anything
you make it
The World According to You

This fire
your funeral pyre
ablaze
for an eternity

-"To a Youth Misguided"

4 Comments:

Blogger Rice said...

For we were young and sure to have our way. Stole that from Mary Hopkin.

Good poem

Cheers

Rice.

12:10 AM

 
Blogger Trisaratops said...

Great poem! Thanks! :)

3:05 PM

 
Blogger TriZilla said...

Very Neat! Thanks Try... :)

9:50 PM

 
Blogger tryathlete said...

Susan - "the squeal with a quill?"

6:26 AM

 

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